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The month of August
Drew to an end
Goodbye, I said
To a lifelong friend
I will not see him
Never again
I watched him go
I stood there alone
His was voice low
Goodbye, said he
Then she came
Pale faced, yet dark
Her eyes like pits
Death was her name.
I cried that night,
And I cried the day
When it was time
To put him in his grave
The coffin was shut,
I’d never again see his face
I cursed the girl
Who led him away,
For if it were not for her
He’d be here still to this day.
Sometimes I go
To visit his grave
Though it only causes me pain
I read the tombstone
Here’s what it says:
“Loving friend
Cherished son
Taken too soon
At the age of 21”
Drew to an end
Goodbye, I said
To a lifelong friend
I will not see him
Never again
I watched him go
I stood there alone
His was voice low
Goodbye, said he
Then she came
Pale faced, yet dark
Her eyes like pits
Death was her name.
I cried that night,
And I cried the day
When it was time
To put him in his grave
The coffin was shut,
I’d never again see his face
I cursed the girl
Who led him away,
For if it were not for her
He’d be here still to this day.
Sometimes I go
To visit his grave
Though it only causes me pain
I read the tombstone
Here’s what it says:
“Loving friend
Cherished son
Taken too soon
At the age of 21”
Yes. My horrid attempt at poetry o_o Its not based on any actual event or death of anyone I know. Its just something I made up at 3 am in the morning.
The girl in the 5th part is death, if you were wondering.
The girl in the 5th part is death, if you were wondering.
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Death can be beautiful and nobody says it is not... Death can be an inspiration as well .. It's all or nothing ... Btw, I guess You mentioned whom the girl was in the 3rd part ... Anyway.. You're talented and what is more . . . inspirational ...
Blessed Be
Blessed Be